My first choreography for film

[Guest]

Im open to suggestions of making this better

 

[Staff]

Thank you for posting. I am not an expert but it looks like post-production edits can be made to make some improvements.

 

[BretfromHope]

Your choreography is pretty solid actually (Great job!) - However, I do agree with @StudentFilmmakers - It wouldn't hurt to have better post-production (Better Lighting for sure). Thanks for sharing - Looks good.

 

[Maura N.]

The sword fighting part was very accurate, however, you can greatly improve the quality of the video by using a gimbal next time when you film it.