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    critique my film, PLEASE

    jblles, Thank you for your comments. Yes, this was my first short film. I will go with your idea for 'a film by blake turner'. I agree that the beginning should have sound. while deciding what music i should use, i thought i would put the film on you tube. 3:30 to the end is a mistake. I...
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    critique my film

    thanks for your response. the young man is struggling to come up with an idea, during the process he suffers from a but of insanity only to be brought back to reality by his friend entering the room again. i used the project to show progression of time without dialogue. thanks again blake
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    critique my film, PLEASE

    It's only about 3 min. Please have look. Your comments and ideas will be greatly appreciated. Thanks. Blake http://youtube.com/watch?v=nXkk1CoVBSI
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    critique my film

    Please have a look. it's only about 3min. your ideas and comments are grealty appreciated. thanks blake http://youtube.com/watch?v=nXkk1CoVBSI
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