My First Animation: A 6-Minute Video, Honest Feedback Wanted

[Yopie]

I would like to read an honest feedback about my first animation, it took almost 1 month to finish this 6 minutes video.
Here's the link: Oke.io

Too bad my voice actors are too busy so I post it without a voice but with sound effects and background music. Also it's just a trailer so please give me an honest feedback. Thank you!

 

[Maura N.]

Hello @Yopie !
I have read the subtitles, it will be a great improve when you will be able to include voice actors as well in your project
Did you make the entire animation?

 

[Olivia Perez]

Dear, it was extremely difficult for me to get to the actual video. However, I did get to see it on your YouTube channel. It is a bit difficult to read subtitles without hearing any voice, and you could play a bit more with sound effects in the future. Overall, the animation itself was quite good! For how long are you into animation? What program did you use?

 

[Yopie]

Hello @Yopie !
I have read the subtitles, it will be a great improve when you will be able to include voice actors as well in your project
Did you made the entire animation?

Yes, I did all the animation.
And thankyouuuuu. I'll translate the subtitle into English as soon as possible.

 

[Yopie]

Dear, it was extremely difficult for me to get to the actual video. However, I did get to see it on your youtube channel. It is a bit difficult to read subtitles without hearing any voice, and you could play a bit more with sound effects in the future. Overall, the animation itself was quite good! For how long are you into animation? What program did you use?

Thankyouuuu!
I started animation, I think it's 2 months now.
The program I use is Procreate Pocket since I don't have any animation software and I only have my phone. And then I edit it on LumaFusion, an app also on my phone.

 

[Maura N.]

Yes, i did all the animation.
And thankyouuuuu. I'll translate the subtitle into english as soon as possible.

If I did not know, I thought it was taken from an anime The animation is very good!