my romantic comedy screenplay "Urban Camper"

[jojo]

Hi

this is my first feature length, not yet finished, looking for feedback!!! ASAP because I want to submit it into some contests, please be honest yet constructive.

it is 90 pages long and I don't have a server, so I would need to email an attachment to you!! please tell me if your interested. I can give you feedback as well in trade!!

THANK YOU :wink:

 

[Kim Welch]

Hi
Hi Jojo, congratulations on your first feature! Can you take a snippet of it and paste it here in the forums, so members can give you feedback? Kim

 

[jojo]

sure

sure

how long of a snippet do you think is appropriate, first 15 pages or is that too long

 

[Kim Welch]

Make it 5
Make it five. Do the first five pages: they're what readers and contest judges judge most closely. If those pages hook them, they'll ask for more.

 

[jodymichelle]

Hi Jojo, I'm interested in reading your script. Welcome to the forums