Teen Filmmaker's Short Script: Critique Wanted

[Caterpillar-print]

Hello peoplez

I'm a teen filmmaker lacking experience and I'm wondering if I should continue to develop this short film script. It's a very short script about a man who thought too much, he had to stop himself from thinking. If anyone wants to read it then leave a post and your email.

 

[temerson]

Finish. The worst thing a screenwriter can do is not finish a script.

 

[lotrfan]

I'd be interested in reading it. My email is [email protected]

 

[Kim Welch]

I would not post your e-mail online like this. It's safer to use the forum's private messages to exchange contact details.

 

[lotrfan]

Can I remove it? Thanks for the suggestion though.